Okay so I did an extract question on Catch-22 by Joseph Heller and I apparently got an 'A' for my basic piece according to my teacher. I did this as a piece of homework and did it under two hours (lollll) but at least you'll see what I did and what crap I wrote. Hopefully you can decipher both my own writing and my teacher's. (I get criticism a lot for my illegible writing... soz)
Notice: This is the first year of this exam and therefore may not be an accurate 'A' grade given that we didn't know the grade boundaries. However, it's a good example to look at in terms of structure, things to include and what not.
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